Descriptive essay
Universidad Autónoma de Aguascalientes.
Docencia del idioma inglés.
Writing Unit 2
López Gómez Brenda Elizabeth.
October/19/2014
My perfect day
Outline.
Introduction: I am going to talk about how my perfect day would be.
Paragraph 1: In the morning
*The place
*The environment ( weather)
*Breakfast
*The things that I would do
Paragraph 2: In the afternoon.
*The place
*The environment ( weather)
*Lunch
*The things that I would do
Paragraph 3: At night
*The place
*The environment ( weather)
*Dinner
*The things that I would do
Conclusion.
Reflection.
My
perfect day
I am going to describe how my perfect
day would be and I will tell you, how the environment would smell and
look, I will describe each things that I could imagine, thing that I
would do, with the people that I would spend time with, the food that
would eat, in others words, I will describe with details each part of
my ideal day (in the morning, afternoon and night).
In the morning, I would like to get
up at 6:00 am to admire the bright sunrise in a beautiful place with
my parents and my siblings in the middle of wonderful mountains,
without the smog of the city only fresh air and that I could hear and
watch the birds singing in the distance and to hear the peaceful
sound of a big waterfall, too.
I would like to eat a delicious shrimp
cocktail with strawberry freshwater and finally for dessert, a tasty
and sweet chocolate cake.
On a sunny day, I would like to go with
my family to climb the mountains and reach the top to see the
landscape around us, such as the big and green trees, the noisy but
wonderful waterfall, beautiful and colorful flowers of different
kinds, in where you could only hear the wind blowing in the trees and
the melodious song of the different kinds of birds such as Canary,
Goldfinch, Parakeet, and so on and later, to come back to a big and
fancy house.
In the afternoon, I would like to
watch interesting horror movies with my lovely family and be eating a
big, delicious and fantastic Hawaiian pizza and juicy huge hamburgers
in our cozy living room. I would like that all the afternoon we could
play fun video games, basketball, football and I can be in the big,
clean and transparent pool and I could stay many hours inside in the
pool and feel the fresh water on my skin. later, at 6:00 pm maybe, I
would love that will start to drizzle and I could smell the wet soil
and I could see the shiny raindrops and clear like diamonds in the
big old windows.
At night, when the drizzle stopped ,my family and I would go outside to see the magnificent myriad of stars
that shining in the dark sky, and I would like to make a night party,
and stay all night awake singing rock songs, talking about funny,
terrible, incredible stories and eat junk food including Mexican food
such as the hot and delicious tacos I would also dancing all the
night without concerns only for that day.
Conclusion: This would be my perfect
day , to spend the day with my family in the great mountains, doing
things that I love as playing different games, eating tasty food that
I like and enjoying this time that I could spend only with them.
Although, I know that this day maybe
would never become a reality, but I do not care, it does not matter
how the weather would be or in which place would also be, the only
things would be to spend a wonderful time with my family, because
being with my family all the days are just perfect.
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Reflection.-
In this essay, I felt with a little trust because I liked the theme about describing things, I think that it was easy to express my ideas, but also I felt little confused with the adjectives because I had to learn a few of them but in the future adjectives can help me to describe how is shapes,colors, people's personality ,characteristics of things, people or places.
